Today Ms. Lang started class on a light note by asking us
what our least favorite color was, as a way to take attendance. It appears that
yellow is the popular color to dislike. We then got right down to business and
discussed the assigned reading on how to respond to reviewing other peoples’
writing. The talk stressed the importance of constructive criticism,
understanding the writer’s goals by having a conversation with the writer, and
not worrying about correcting grammar. By the end of the discussion, we were
eager and ready to start reviewing what our peers had come up with for our “discovery
draft”. After splitting up into groups of three, we took a few minutes to brainstorm
questions that we would want our reviewers to respond to. Then, we exchanged
drafts and began reading what our classmates had written, while taking ten
minutes to talk about what that person wrote. We talked to our peers about how
their paper was going to flow, the transitions that they planned on using, and
how we could further develop our ideas to make the content of the paper more descriptive
and overall better. Of course no class would be complete without writing a
blog, so Ms. Lang challenged us to reflect on the writing workshop that we had
just participated in, and blog about the feedback we received from our group.
We thought about what advice was and wasn’t helpful, and what we will include
in our next draft. Overall, class today was devoted to challenging us to think
more about the goals of our paper. By working in groups and getting feedback
from other people, we were forced to think about our work in a much different
perspective. Although this is still part of one of the beginning stages in the
writing process, it is certainly a crucial one because it can make the
difference in whether the paper is interesting to read, or just another college
paper that was written the night before class without much thought. Class
concluded with the announcement that our homework is to read an article about
identifying plagiarism, which can be found on the class blog.
Ms. Lang teaching us about reviewing drafts:
Ms. Lang teaching us about reviewing drafts:
Students hard at work in the writing workshop:
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